- Mr hamilton gave us perimeters .eg. it had to have an interrogation which would be the main part of the film. then we also had a time limit which I think should have been a bit longer. then we started filming, this was hard because the script we had was very hard to say because we had to have a very hard accent, and we had to use words that didn’t exist.
2. We were gone for the first lesson so ben came up with the original idea of a mafia project. in the next lesson, Ben showed us what he had done but it didn’t really make much sense so we came up with a different yet similar project to work with. we also at the start used chat GPT to make the script, but that didn’t work, so we ended up just writing the script from scratch.
3. Editing, time, and restrictions. these were the biggest problems because no one in our group had a lot of editing experience so the editing took a while to get right. if we had more time, then we could have done better filming and editing and we would have been able to adjust it
4. if we had more time we would have been able to do more editing and get better quality. when it came to filming we had a hard time, because the language in the scripts was hard to get used to. We also needed to do a lot of editing because we had special effects, cuts in different places and we also had to do extra filming so extra time would have helped us.
film 0.1.mp4 this is the film
Script:
Detective Black: Neil
Detective DE SANTA: Mia
Franklin White Suspect: Michael
Cruise White Killer : Orlando
Cesar Gang Member: Ben
Gang Leader: Toby
JANITOR: Orlando
Voice Over:
This is all that happened I promise
I was walking eating my roll
Just chattin it up with my homie
We saw the crip’s across the alley
My homie knew what he wanted to do
We approached them
They started getting physical
Homie told me to run
So i did
Next thing you know one of the crips is deads
That its i promise
Script
LIGHTS SWITCH ON AND SHOW THE TABLE WITH WALTER SUSPECT SITTING DOWN AT A BARE CHAIR
DETECTIVE DE SANTA: Would you like a glass of water or anything?
FRANKLIN WHITE: Nah I know what you tryna do *with attitude*
DETECTIVE DE SANTA: *Sighs*
DETECTIVE BLACK: Do you know why your here Mr White?
FRANKLIN WHITE: all i know is I was walking and one of CJ’s boys got popped and then u guys caught me down the alleyway. I was just tryna run man.
DETECTIVE BLACK: Why were you trying to run
FRANKLIN WHITE: Because I heard a man get capped!
FRANKLIN WHITE I ain’t do it!
DETECTIVE DE SANTA: You seem pretty sure of that I see, even though according to the forensics report one of the guns found has your DNA all over it
FRANKLIN WHITE: I’m ain’t do s**t they pulled up on us I wasn’t armed
DETECTIVE BLACK: Us??? The hell your mean us who else was with you
DETECTIVE BLACK: Who was with you tell us or this integration about be advanced you feel me?
(Shows Franklin being shocked?)
FRANKLIN WHITE: This is all that happened on my life I swear
(FLASH BACK PLAYS OF FRANKLIN AND CRUISE WALKING DOWN PAST ALLEY WAY
FRANKLIN WHITE: This meat pie the best on life for real man *eating meat pie*
CRUISE WHITE: Yeah of course that deli always got the best s**t
BOTH KEEP WALKING JUST IN FRONT OF ALLEY WAY
CRUISE WHITE: aye isnt that the boy that wanna mess u up
FRANKLIN WHITE: oh s**t for real thats him
CRUISE WHITE: Aye keep it calm just avoid i ain’t lookin for any of that right now
BOTH WALK DOWN THE ALLEY TO TRY TO AVOID THEM
CESAR: Aye where you think you going boy
WHITE BROTHERS TURN AROUND
CRUISE WHITE: Nowhere near your a** thats for sure
CJ: The hell you say boy
CJ PULLS OUT GUN AND SHOOTS
EVERYONE TAKES COVER
CRUISE PULLS OUT GUN
CRUISE WHITE:RUN aye Franki run!
FRANKLIN RUNS AROUND ALLEY SUCCESFULLY AND HIDES
LARGE PART IS NOT SHOWN
CJ RUNS AWAY
CESAR SHOW BEING SHOT ON THE GROUND KILLED
COPS ARE CALLED
FRANKLIN NOT COMPLETY AWARE ABOUT WHATS GONE ON TRYS TO RUN BUT GETS CAUGHT BY COPS TRYING TO RUN
END OF FLASHBACK
FRANKLIN: That’s all that happened.
DETECTIVE BLACK: Then who shot Cesar a ghost?!?
(Franklin hesitates)
FRANKLIN: I don’t know i ain’t see nothing I told you I just ran man.
(KNOCK ON INTEROGATION ROOM DOOR)
DETECTIVE BLACK: come in
JANITOR: I’m here to clean up…
(Pulls out gun and shoots both detectives)
CRUISE WHITE: (REAVELS HIMSELF) Hey bro lets leave this joint
(SHOWS what actually happened; Cruise killing Cesar)
CRUISE SHOOTS CESAR IN THE SHOULDER ONLY THEM THERE EVERYONE ELSE FLED
CRUISE GETS CLOSER TO CESAR AND SHOOTS HIM DEAD ON THE GROUND
SLOWMO OF FRANKLIN AND CRUISE WALKING OUT OF THE POLICE STATION
THE END
Storyboard:
