What I did well…
The placement of the computer and the bag bring the attention to the middle because you have seen everything around the area. The background is bland and not exiting which draws the attention to the middle.
What I could improve on…
The lighting and the focus on the photo isn’t the best and looks okay from a far but if you were to zoom in it looks really out of focus. The lighting reflects of the computer making it stand out more which is bad because it is in your face. The phone has notifications on so that could draw the attention there.
like the photo, but its a bit small maybe crop it (empty space) theres a lot of grey