What I liked:
I liked how the fence was able to frame the photo and by doing this the focus was primarily on the person. I also like the colours, its got a bit of green and blue and those colours go alright together.
What I could have done better:
I think the background was a bit busy ( lots of bright greenery ). To try and solve that problem we could have angled the camera to face more to the right, away from the trees. I think we also could have been a bit more creative and wore something other than my school uniform.